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May. 9th, 2013

I basically just use this journal for fiveacts now heh. Real life got incredibly busy and looks to remain so until I am reduced to the point of happy sobbing on the ground. Still, at least I can TRY to write fic! (Stress relief, right?)

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Here's how it works:

- Post a list of your five favourite kinks/acts or themes in your journal. At the bottom, add what fandoms/pairings you're interested in.
- Comment to the master post with a link to your post.
- Read other people's lists here.
- Post comment-fic based off of other people's lists.

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Five acts

1. Talking and communication issues (dirty talk or verbal seduction; sweet talking; reciting poetry; talking someone to orgasm; talking during sex; pillow talk; phone sex; speech becoming broken as one is aroused or upset; being inarticulate or articulate; aphasia; talking fast)
2. Noise (screaming or yelling during sex; whimpering or sobbing; purring, growling)
3. Enemies working together
4. Repressed/controlled characters falling apart entirely in bed (not to the point of sobbing, but noises and flushing and just generally being all messed-up)
5. Oral fixation or fetishization (lips, tongue, or whole mouth; french-kissing; licking; oral displays using food or beer bottles; smoking cigarettes, cigars, or pipes; biting or chewing one's lip(s))

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Fandoms/Pairings

-Blackadder Goes Forth - Blackadder/Captain Darling
-Coriolanus: Coriolanus/Aufidus
-Dead Man Down: Darcy/Victor
-Firefly: Simon/Jayne, River/Jayne, Mal/Simon, Mal/River, Inara/Kaylee, Simon/Jayne/River, Simon/Mal/River, Simon/Inara, Simon/Mal/Inara
-Hannibal: Will/Hannibal
-Les Miserables: Javert/Jean Valjean, Eponine/Cosette
-Person of Interest: Harold Finch/John Reese
-Ripper Street: Homer Jackson/Bennett Drake, Homer Jackson/Edmund Reid, Edmund Reid/Bennett Drake, Edmund Reid/Bennett Drake/Homer Jackson
-Skyfall: James Bond/Q, Severine/Eve Moneypenny
-Some Like it Hot - Joe/Jerry
-The Avengers - Loki/Tony, Clint/Coulson, Thor/Loki, Thor/Loki/Tony
-The Demonata - Darren Shan- Juni Swan/Kernel Fleck, Juni Swan/Kernel Fleck/Dervish Grady/Meera Flame, Dervish Grady/Meera Flame, Timas/Shark, Lord Loss/Bec/Grubbs Grady/Kernel Fleck, Kernel Fleck/Grubbs Grady
-The Thick of It - Malcolm/Ollie
-The Voice UK RPF: Danny/Will.i.am
-Vampire Babylon - Chris Marie Green - Dawn/Claudius, Claudius/Costin, Costin/Benedikte, Della/Lilly
-Welcome to the Punch: Jacob Sternwood/Max Lewinsky

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outboxed
May. 11th, 2013 05:33 pm (UTC)
This is probably terrible but I had to write you something because your fandoms are perfect. But, uh, yes, anyway, I really hope you like it.

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Hannibal (NBC), Hannibal/Will, unprofessional discourse, features: talking during sex/broken speech

"So, Will," Hannibal says, tone clinical as ever, "tell me about these wholly unprofessional things you've been thinking of." His hand, as he speaks, is making a gradual progress up Will's inseam but it stops, patient, at the end of the sentence, as if awaiting a response.

"Go on," Hannibal says, still utterly measured.

"I think," Will says, and Hannibal's hand moves up to cup Will's crotch. It's as gentle and undemanding a touch as seems humanly possible, given where it is, but the friction, the reality of it, is enough to make Will gasp.

"Go on," Hannibal says again, hand stilled. "What is it that you think?"

"I think about," another gasp, another movement of Hannibal's hand, a moment of insistent pressure, "about this, I-" and his voice cracks. He's learning now how Hannibal's hand will still when he pauses, when he breaks, so he hurries on, words too fast, "I think about you and I think-" a hitch of breath, "about how-" and it was enough to have Hannibal's hand working him through his jeans but now he's got Hannibal's tongue, trailing slow up his neck, and it doesn't stop right away, not just as soon as Will pauses, words gone, unsure what he was even saying, and he hopes this will be the end of the questioning, that Hannibal will just keep-

But no, of course not.

"Will," Hannibal says, suddenly seeming distant, voice betraying no hint of what he's been doing to Will, "how am I supposed to help me if you won't open up to me? You have to talk to me, Will, or how can we make any progress?"

"I think about you," Will snaps out, almost angry, a little desperate, "doing this-" he says, but there's Hannibal's hand again, and it's unbuttoning his jeans now, as though they're finally getting somewhere, "to me," Will says, momentum of his words ebbing as Hannibal's fingers touch skin, finally.
But Will's learnt the rules now, and he knows he has to keep talking, "and I want it. I know it's-" and there, that's it, Hannibal's hand on his cock, oh Christ it's-

The hand stills. Will says, "unprofessional, I, uh- oh, fuck, I know- but I can't- I can't stop, I-" and there's a roughness to the way Hannibal pushes Will's jeans down and, "I try- god, I try. Only-" the rhythm of Hannibal's hand, working his cock, begins to establish then stops, waiting, "I can't make it stop," Will says, voice half a whine, a plea, "I- I can't control it- my mind, it just- it's just-" breath hitching," the dreams, like the Hobbs dreams, I wake up and I- my mind just- it won't stop, won't let me stop-" and there's Hannibal's tongue again, just at the base of his jaw, and Will tries to keep talking, he tries, but he was close already, he was already-

He staggers out a last few words, isn't even sure if they are words really, thinks they might have just been "I- you- I just-" and that's all it takes, that and Hannibal's hand, a brush of lips and the imagined feel of teeth against his skin. The sound he makes then isn't a word, isn't anything more than a whimper of caught breath and relief.

"Now, Will," Hannibal says, "Doesn't it feel much better to talk about it."
linndechir
May. 11th, 2013 05:46 pm (UTC)
Just saw this when I posted my ficlet, and this is awesome. Absolutely not terrible at all, no need to worry about that. Hannibal is such a wonderfully mean bastard, and I love that last line. Good therapy. ;)
outboxed
May. 11th, 2013 07:29 pm (UTC)
I'm so glad you liked it. (And I can't help being really amused by how all of our fandoms are overlapping here - clearly doreyg shares a flawless sense of taste with the pair of us.) And, yes, Hannibal can be terribly cruel and we know he's into unconventional therapy. (;
doreyg
May. 13th, 2013 06:25 pm (UTC)
I really am starting to think that we have a hive-mind type thing of collective flawless taste. Because, seriously, ALL THE GOOD THINGS! :D
outboxed
May. 13th, 2013 09:37 pm (UTC)
That sounds bizarrely credible. Flawless taste of flawlessness, we all have it! :D
doreyg
May. 13th, 2013 06:23 pm (UTC)
sergesragejkasgheaiufgeaigbeaugbeagfbeaufbyeafuaef!

...Oh, yeah, words.

I'm pleased to say that this is far from terrible. This is, in fact, absolutely brilliant and upon a reread (I read it originally a few days ago and flailed but had no computer so DAMN YOU LIFE) I am inclined to say that it is so brilliant that I'm falling off my chair and flailing.

Because, seriously, it is like YOU REACHED INSIDE MY BRAIN AND PULLED EVERYTHING I WANTED OUT! THE RAGGEDNESS! THE BREATHINESS! THE MANIPULATION AND HANNIBAL BEING A LOVABLE DICK AND... JUST YES! Seriously. This is not only everything that I want from a Hannibal fic, but everything that I want from a fic in general - and that is WONDERFUL.

In particular (mgeagagaerg):

"His hand, as he speaks, is making a gradual progress up Will's inseam but it stops, patient, at the end of the sentence, as if awaiting a response."

I knew from this line that I was going to love it. I apparently have a thing for the tracing of inseams. I feel that this is a good discovery to make.

"but the friction, the reality of it, is enough to make Will gasp."

CHARACTERS THAT SUDDENLY REALIZE THAT THEY'RE REALLY AND ACTUALLY HAVING SEX IS ANOTHER ONE OF MY FAVOURITE THINGS. So, yes, props on that too. ^^

""I think about," another gasp, another movement of Hannibal's hand, a moment of insistent pressure, "about this, I-" and his voice cracks. He's learning now how Hannibal's hand will still when he pauses, when he breaks, so he hurries on, words too fast, "I think about you and I think-" a hitch of breath, "about how-""

EVERYTHING THAT I HAVE EVER WANTED. (I have such a kink for broken words. I know that I put it up there, but I feel like I need to repeat it as much as possible for you've got it perfectly and YESSS.)

"now he's got Hannibal's tongue, trailing slow up his neck, and it doesn't stop right away"

Hnnnngh is pretty much the only thing I can say to that.

"But Will's learnt the rules now, and he knows he has to keep talking, "and I want it. I know it's-" and there, that's it, Hannibal's hand on his cock, oh Christ it's-"

I also like broken thoughts during sex. So this remains ABSOLUTELY PERFECT, yes.

"The hand stills. Will says, "unprofessional, I, uh- oh, fuck, I know- but I can't- I can't stop, I-" and there's a roughness to the way Hannibal pushes Will's jeans down and, "I try- god, I try. Only-""

THIS BIT

...I'm not sure if I have anything more than that.

Just - THIS BIT. And Will's broken words, and all the breathy impications, and THAT LITTLE BIT OF ROUGHNESS FROM HANNIBAL. And just... Yeah. afjaeffaf.

"He staggers out a last few words, isn't even sure if they are words really, thinks they might have just been "I- you- I just-""

<3333333 I am soooo up for the babbling.

...And, just, YES! All of it. And the end line is so perfectly in character. And I just love the both of them. And this just has that wonderful sexiness and yet edge of darkness to it that makes it absolutely PERFECT. It was wonderful and lovely and brilliant and, er, yeah. I might go flail some more now (while trying not to fall off my chair again). Thank you so much! :D
outboxed
May. 13th, 2013 09:35 pm (UTC)
Try not to actually fall off your chair flailing at the fic because what if you hit your head and somehow no longer had flawless taste and the ability to write wonderfully? IT WOULD BE TRAGIC AND I WOULD BE TO BLAME.

But, ahem, anyway, I am incredibly gratified that my fic hit the right notes. (Even with some stuff that wasn't in your list! And that's got to be either incredible luck or a side effect of how amazingly aligned our interests seem to be.) And, hey, this is Hannibal/Will so it had to be sexy and dark in order to be them but I honestly wasn't at all sure I could pull it off, even as I was writing it, so I am so glad it worked for you. Thank you for being the reason I finally wrote Hannibal fic after weeks of this show eating my soul.